Batman = the city of horror

This was a project that I started writing in my free time and now it is complete.
This project will be released in three parts over three weeks.

Chapter #1 = 28/6/13
Chapter #2 = 5/7/13
Chapter #3 = 12/7/13

Please let me know what you think

chapter 1:

(THE BATMOBILE ZOOMED DOWN THE EMPTY STREET OF GOTHAM HEADING TOWARDS ARKHAM ASYLUM)



BATMAN = COMISSIONER, HOW IS EVERYTHING?



(OVER THE COMMS)



COMMISIONER GORDON = EVERYTHINGS FINE, JOKERS BEEN NEUTRELISED



BATMAN = GOOD, IM HEADING THERE NOW KEEP ME INFORMED



(A LOUD ALARM IS HEARD OVER THE COMMS)



COMMISIONER GORDON = BATMAN! CROCS ESCAPED WE NEED YOU HERE!



BATMAN = IM ON MY WAY



(IN ARKHAM ASYLUM)



KILLER CROC = ILL HUNT YOU ALL DOWN



GUARD = SHOOT THAT FREAK!



(CROC KILLS THE GUARDS AND HEADS TOWARDS THE MAIN ENTRANCE)



(BATMAN ARRIVES AT THE ASYLUM, HE JUMPS OUT OF THE BATMOBILE AND RUNS TOWARDS KILLER CROC)



BATMAN = STOP THIS CROC, ITS OVER



KILLER CROC = FOR YOU IT IS



(CROC SWINGS HIS ARM AT BATMAN, HE JUMPS OUT OF THE WAY AND BATMAN KICKS THE BACK OF KILLER CROCS LEG, MAKING HIM FALL OVER)



KILLER CROC = RAW!!!



(BATMAN THROWS HIS BATARANG AT CROC MAKING HIM FALL TO THE GROUND)



BATMAN = I TOLD YOU



KILLER CROC = WHAT?



BATMAN = ITS OVER



(COMMISIONER GORDON ARRIVES WITH SECURITY TO TAKE KILLER CROC AWAY)



COMMISIONER GORDON = ARE YOU OK?



BATMAN = IM FINE



(KILLER CROC SPITS AT BATMAN)



COMMISIONER GORDON = TAKE HIM AWAY!



(THE MASSIVE TV SCREEN IN THE ROOM STARTS TO COME ON, THERE IS NO PICTURE BUT THERE IS A VERY RECODNISABLE VOICE SPEAKING)

Thanks for the advice, something went wrong when I was writing it